Saturday, July 2, 2011

how can i write a chorus for this song i am writing.?

I've been tryong to write a chorus for this song for about a year now,
but just can;t seem to come up with anything. So if anyone has any
suggestions PLEASE HELP!!!

The last time i said goodbye it's felt like years ago, never thought
with all those lies id see the day id watch you go. ever since the day
you left i've felt so alone, the days go by and i just die when you're
not there to hold. even though its been so long i still feel you near
me, can't believe i miss those times when you were mine( when you were
mine) please come back home
it was inspired by the song Hearts Burst into Fire by bullet for my
valentine, and i wrote it to be metalcore.

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